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Poster Peer Review-- Yilun Dai #9

Open yilundai opened 6 years ago

yilundai commented 6 years ago

Overall design/layout: The overall design looks great. It has clear sections and highlighted brackets such as introduction, data to indicate relevant content. Each paragraph has a small arrow that makes information concise. I like the way that you present crime type comparison of the two cities. With graphs and results listed side by side, it makes your audience easy to comprehend. Visualization: You have a good variety of graphs. Your graphs are clearly labeled and I really like the color that you use in your graphs. Black, red and grey not only bring a clear contrast to the audience, but also indicate your topic of crime. There are several improvements that I think you can make in visualization of your data. In the Exploratory Data Analysis section, you should add t on the x-axis of “Seattle crime by hour” graph to follow your explanation in the data section. Another thing is that for day of the week, if you use number 1 to 7 instead of 0 to 6, your audience can understand which day of week has the highest crime counts directly. Last by not least, you can potentially create more effective graphs by including both Chicago and Seattle’s data in one graph. Content: It is a very interesting project; Seattle has always been on top of the list of cities that I want to live in the most. I can tell your project is very detail-oriented and I like the methods you used to explore crime type. The comparison between different models is clear and precise. The only thing that might be helpful to add is to include some crime types statistics in your poster.