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Some documentation issues #190

Open GoogleCodeExporter opened 9 years ago

GoogleCodeExporter commented 9 years ago
Ramona Walls did a short review and had these comments.

fiat object 
(https://bfo.googlecode.com/svn/releases/2014-05-03/owl-group/bfo_classes.owl) 
is a bit confusing, because the label is "fiat object" but the elucidation says 
"b is a fiat object part =...". Also the examples of usage include "the 
division of the brain into regions" and "the division of the planet into 
hemispheres". These to me sound like examples of a process rather than examples 
of a fiat object. I think examples like "the Western hemisphere of the Earth" 
are much clearer.

This is a minor thing, but the usage of punctuation and capitalization seems to 
be somewhat random. For example, a few of the examples of usage have a period, 
even though they are not sentences (e.g., "your process of aging." for 
process). Obviously this is not something that should interfere with the 
release.

Original issue reported on code.google.com by lori.f.r...@gmail.com on 14 May 2014 at 2:48