Home page edits

[tskillern]

• [x] (1) In the intro, let's say "In fiscal year 2021"... We don't need to say that every time, but in intro parts, let's make it clear. Otherwise, it's wrong and people might wonder: well, there are 2 months left...?

• [x] (2) Intro numbers should be:

• 29,793 donors

• 54,543 gifts

• [x] (3) Investment numbers should be, in order:

• $53M

• $127M

• $28M

• $201M

• [x] (4) In fourth investment item, "health care" should be two words.

• [x] (5) UCCS story blurb should not have commas around Johnathan's name. If that makes it too long a construction, you could make it: "As a first-generation college senior, Johnathan Gachuzo Gonzalez is lifting up..."

• [x] (6) CU Denver story blurb should not have commas around Aleaza Goldberg.

• [x] (7) First financials item:

• Add $ before 371.2 number

• Add "fiscal" before "last" so that it's "$371.2 million given last fiscal year"

• [x] (8) Average gift size is $6,806.

• [x] (9) The graph above the "See Our Financials" button attributes something to donors that is not really their contribution: the ROI and endowment. I think we can consider a couple options: (1) remove those two things and just say: "Despite a challenging year, donors like you advanced CU’s mission with support from all corners of the CU community." Or (2) rephrase it so that it doesn't attribute those things to donors.

[Feissit]

I have made these changes and created a pull request. @alexfinnarn can you reply here when the changes are merged so Tim can validate? Thank you!

[alexfinnarn]

That pull request has been merged.

[tskillern]

I think if there’s a hard return and “fueling” is capped, that’d work.

From: Feissit @.> Date: Tuesday, November 2, 2021 at 2:04 PM To: CUCentralAdvancement/essential-cu @.> Cc: Tim Skillern @.>, Mention @.> Subject: Re: [CUCentralAdvancement/essential-cu] Home page edits (Issue #471)

@tskillernhttps://github.com/tskillern -- I changed this to two sentences with periods to break it up, but I don't think it looks as nice/clean as

Philanthropy is transformative Fueling passion, motivation and joy

It's not grammatically correct, but the bolded text reads pretty clear imo. Can we revert to the previous version? A dash might look odd here too

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[tskillern]

All home page content edits are confirmed and good to go. @alexfinnarn @Feissit