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Home sharing app for Hillary Clinton supporters
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COPY: VETTING DISCLAIMER more explicit and dire #43

Closed dsjoerg closed 8 years ago

dsjoerg commented 8 years ago

Emails to hosts and guests currently say "We strongly recommend that potential hosts and visitors connect over social media before making any housing plans."

Instead we need to make it clear that:

maybe craigslist or airbnb have language we can steal.

dsjoerg commented 8 years ago

Hey @mattjacobus @nankrafft how about: "WARNING: while most users of HillaryBNB are friendly, trustworthy and responsible Hillary supporters, some of them might not be. We have NOT vetted HillaryBNB users at all. It is YOUR responsibility to evaluate potential hosts and visitors and decide if it's safe to proceed.

NanKrafft commented 8 years ago

That copy is for sure more direct and along the lines of what we need. I think it might be good to tone it down a bit - seems fearful.

Consider...

"PLEASE NOTE: Guests and hosts have NOT been vetted by the campaign, by volunteers, or by anyone else. It is your responsibility to contact potential hosts and visitors in advance and decide whether you are comfortable and safe staying with them"

We should also see about having a legal eye on this. There might the standard language we can use.

NanKrafft commented 8 years ago

@alittlecynical

dsjoerg commented 8 years ago

@NanKrafft your revision looks great to me. I'll update the language to that for now and await further revisions / suggestions.

NanKrafft commented 8 years ago

Doc with Copy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cxThVacGKHSMLKl6MX5CpEasXvj613l2f9eOo8MLXJQ/edit?ts=57fbfeff

NanKrafft commented 8 years ago

USE:

"PLEASE NOTE: Guests and hosts have NOT been vetted by the campaign, by volunteers, or by anyone else. It is your responsibility to contact potential hosts and visitors in advance and decide whether you are comfortable and safe staying with them"

dsjoerg commented 8 years ago

Perfect, we have been using that language for a few days so this is Done