Here is our (TU Dresden) review as a pull request. This contains mainly local changes, no structural changes. For suggestions about structural changes please refer to the email containing my detailed review of the document. (resubmitted pull request including additional commits)
Here is our (TU Dresden) review as a pull request. This contains mainly local changes, no structural changes. For suggestions about structural changes please refer to the email containing my detailed review of the document. (resubmitted pull request including additional commits)