GIRLS BAND CRY: subtitles feedback

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Ep. 01

~ 15:18
注：肥后国是熊本地区古称。「肥後もっこす」指熊本人的固执气质，与「津軽じょっぱり」、「土佐いごっそう」合称日本三大顽固。
註：肥後國是熊本地區古稱。「肥後もっこす」指熊本人的固執氣質，與「津軽じょっぱり」、「土佐いごっそう」合稱日本三大頑固。

When wrapping a new line, could you consider adding two full-width spaces at the beginning of the second line?

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Ep. 03

~ 12:03
继承她的事业会是我
繼承她的事業會是我

她的事业/她的事業 -> 她事业的/她事業的 maybe it is more in line with the language habits?

(继承她事业的会是我/繼承她事業的會是我)

Ep. 04

~ 10:07
那你为什么要发消息说要退出乐队
那妳為甚麼要發訊息說要退出樂隊

(OPTIONAL) Not considered a mistake. This is just an optimization suggestion.

The two 要 are quite close to each other, maybe you could consider removing the one in front?

Ep. 09

~ 15:10
因为不想人被讨厌
因為不想人被討厭

Looks like a mistake. 人被 -> 被人?

Ep. 12

~ 06:47
我要让努力自己不后悔
我要讓努力自己不後悔

It reads a bit strange. I guess it should be 努力让自己/努力讓自己.

~ 12:06
地点：CLUB CITTA'
地點：CLUB CITTA'
~ 12:10
在CITTA'办两天
在CITTA'辦兩天

I do not quite understand the meaning of single quotes. Maybe it was accidentally typed out? Now I understand.

Others

Ending part lyrics

想着不过是梦想 陪出一个笑脸
想著不過是夢想 陪出一個笑臉

I searched on the Internet, maybe 赔/賠 is more appropriate?

Insert song lyrics, location of Chinese and Japanese

In the episode 05, when the lyrics of the two insert songs are at the top of the screen, the Japanese text is below the Chinese text. The opposite is true in the lyrics of an insert song in episode 08. From what I understand of your style, the latter should be the expected behavior.

Preview

*Ep. 05 (JPSC) ~ 09:34*  *Ep. 05 (JPSC) ~ 09:59*  *Ep. 05 (JPSC) ~ 15:31*  *Ep. 08 (JPSC) ~ 13:48* 

Dialogue subtitles at the top of the screen, location of Chinese and Japanese

Similar to above, but for dialogue subtitles.

Preview

*Ep. 01 (JPSC) ~ 00:10*  *Ep. 10 (JPSC) ~ 20:38* 

Sources

Unbatch releases.

[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][01][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][01][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][02][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][02][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][03][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][03][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][04][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][04][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][05][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][05][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][06][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][06][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][07][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][07][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][08][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][08][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][09][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][09][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][10][v2][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][10][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][11][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][11][1080p][JPTC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][12][1080p][JPSC].mp4
[Nekomoe kissaten][GIRLS BAND CRY][12][1080p][JPTC].mp4

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@MIRIMIRIM

I have updated the description. Now up to ep. 09.

I forgot to comment when I added the description of ep. 03 earlier.

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@MIRIMIRIM

Now up to episode 12.

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Ep. 12

~ 12:06
地点：CLUB CITTA'
地點：CLUB CITTA'
~ 12:10
在CITTA'办两天
在CITTA'辦兩天

I do not quite understand the meaning of single quotes. Maybe it was accidentally typed out?

Because this is it’s name https://clubcitta.co.jp/

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Because this is it’s name
clubcitta.co.jp

Oh, I got it.

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