Keep “exploratory analysis” separate from data section. Also, I don’t think you need to split up the data section into subsections. Perhaps you should have one section for the data, one for the model and estimation procedure, and then a section with the results. Scale the tables so that they fit the text width. The histogram figures look nice. But make sure the fitted distributions do not get cropped. Write the names of the variables (or abbreviations) associated with each coefficient instead of just the coefficients in the regression tables. Otherwise, this looks good.
Keep “exploratory analysis” separate from data section. Also, I don’t think you need to split up the data section into subsections. Perhaps you should have one section for the data, one for the model and estimation procedure, and then a section with the results. Scale the tables so that they fit the text width. The histogram figures look nice. But make sure the fitted distributions do not get cropped. Write the names of the variables (or abbreviations) associated with each coefficient instead of just the coefficients in the regression tables. Otherwise, this looks good.