Closed Aterfax closed 6 years ago
Wording flows better if we don't specify every time. Does more need to be done to show ourselves as a video gaming society, or can we safely rely on the assumption that they'll know?
Depends if you assume new people will read throughly / are already members?
The top navbar text is perhaps unclear on what the society actually does?
We do all kinds of video and computer gaming - not just general gaming - could be confused for table top games, card games etc... It was also suggested to make this BOLD in the first paragraph to make it clear.
First paragraph text could also be clarified - there may be other locations that need this edit: