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Urban-Analytics-Technology-Platform / demoland-project

Developing a modelling system to quantify features of land use in urban environments, UK based
https://urban-analytics-technology-platform.github.io/demoland-project/
MIT License
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Feedback #37

Closed yongrenjie closed 1 year ago

yongrenjie commented 1 year ago

@ciupava, @martinfleis I'm going through the repo + book now. I'm going to fix what I can myself (eg typos), and leave comments on the rest as I go along.

It'll probably take me a while, I'll let you all know again when I'm done :)

yongrenjie commented 1 year ago

@ciupava @martinfleis Okay, I'm done — only one comment left! 😊

I know it's a lot to look at. If it helps, many of the things I changed are just to make it look slightly nicer and clearer (e.g. the table of variables in the methodology section), I haven't messed with the meaning much. I updated the data sources, but Anna and I went through that in the office together so I think it should be ok.

The only page where I did a more substantial rewrite was intro.qmd, so if you want to do a side by side comparison, that would be the page to look at. I kind of hope I'm qualified enough to write on that, though. 😅

martinfleis commented 1 year ago

Thanks @yongrenjie!