Closed dwsinger closed 3 years ago
I've tried to make this more into a rallying cry, something that could (should) be inspiring. Also, it lacked a vision statement of what we foresee, what we are trying to bring about.
Overall, I like the changes and the change to a more directive tone.
I've tried to make this more into a rallying cry, something that could (should) be inspiring. Also, it lacked a vision statement of what we foresee, what we are trying to bring about.