Hi @lindsayad . This is great! Please look over my various changes (feel free to reject some!). Most are grammatical. Some are just additional detail. I scribbled them in this pdf :
Moltres.pdf
There are some more remaining things. This is just a first pass and maybe introduces more problems than it fixes. For example, I added a bunch of placeholders for citations which must be found and added.
Hi @lindsayad . This is great! Please look over my various changes (feel free to reject some!). Most are grammatical. Some are just additional detail. I scribbled them in this pdf : Moltres.pdf
There are some more remaining things. This is just a first pass and maybe introduces more problems than it fixes. For example, I added a bunch of placeholders for citations which must be found and added.