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Editor's comments #13

Open labarba opened 3 years ago

labarba commented 3 years ago

While we ask you to address all of the points raised, the following points need to be substantially worked on:

Referee 2 provided the following references via email (regarding their major concerns 1 and 2):

https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/26874202/ -- Biochim Biophys Acta. 2016 Jul;1858(7 Pt B):1610-8. doi: 10.1016/j.bbamem.2016.02.007. Epub 2016 Feb 10. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC7278654/ https://pubs.acs.org/doi/10.1021/acs.jpclett.8b02298 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC6456034/

https://science.sciencemag.org/content/370/6513/203 https://www.nature.com/articles/s41586-018-0396-4

Referee 3 provided the following information/references via email (regarding their concerns 3 and 4):

Li, A. and Gao, K., 2016. Accurate estimation of electrostatic binding energy with Poisson-Boltzmann equation solver DelPhi program. Journal of Theoretical and Computational Chemistry, 15(08), p.1650071. Nguyen, D.D., Wang, B. and Wei, G.W., 2017. Accurate, robust, and reliable calculations of Poisson–Boltzmann binding energies. Journal of computational chemistry, 38(13), pp.941-948.


You will also need to make some editorial changes so that it complies with our Guide to Authors at https://www.nature.com/natcomputsci/for-authors .

In particular, I would like to highlight the following points of our style:

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labarba commented 3 years ago

commit at time of submission: ee28810cf09bfd9ba49d9da3f9b05ee18160f10c

We can use git-latexdiff to highlight the changes between submitted and revised versions, as requested by the editor.

labarba commented 3 years ago

Abstract: we went from 342 words in bd34595 to 215 in 1c9c671

labarba commented 3 years ago

Cover letter to the editor

  1. Consider the missing references pointed out by Referees # 2 and # 3 (see below). ​ We have cited the literature on coarse grained models suggested by Referee # 2 in the introduction section. ​ Referee # 3 suggested two references as examples to show that grid refinement study should be carried out for a large set of realistic biomolecules: Li and Gao's paper studies the effect of grid spacing on binding free energy in DelPhi; Nguyen etal's paper investigates the grid convergence of the binding free energy using MIBPB. We cited both software (DelPhi and MIBPB) in our revision. We improved the grid convergence study by using 8 more proteins and compared our results with those from APBS and MIBPB. ​
  2. Compare your software tool with other methods in the literature, as suggested by Referees # 2 and # 3. ​ This revision introduces new grid-convergence study with 9 different molecules, and result comparison with APBS (in the result section) and MIBPB (in the appendix). ​
  3. Validate your approach with problems of known solutions, as suggested by Referee # 3. ​ We have already verified our software with an analytical solution using Kirkwood's sphere. Such analytical solution is not available for real molecules. Our new results show agreements with APBS and MIBPB using 9 real molecules.
labarba commented 3 years ago
  1. Explain your use case in more details, including why this is meaningful to the community. Provide other use cases, if possible and feasible.

Reviewer 1 expressed concern that the featured use case in the article is of “questionable value: the solvation energies of very large molecules.” In our response to this question, we explain that structure-based computations (like solvation energy) are still valuable for large molecules: researchers may run ensemble computations with many conformations, for example, to obtain an energy landscape. The central point of our software platform is that it provides high researcher productivity in these settings, where sets of experiments can be run from Jupyter notebooks, allowing short dynamics simulations coupled with solvation energy calculation. The use cases are varied: computing binding energies of large molecules, ensemble calculations, coupled short dynamics with structure-based analysis. The point is these investigations are facilitated by the interactive-computing environment, powered by high-performance algorithmic engines. The Zika virus case demonstrated that our software can handle virus-scale computations and the performance is on par with other well-optimized PB codes. We have added to the discussion to clarify this point, as detailed in the reviewer response.