Closed bitterjug closed 4 years ago
I had a go at rewriting the core concepts to get the data and accesssor function mentioned as early as possible. I used an injunctive voice and spoke to the reader as "you". That's a style I like but you might prefer something more formal?
Looks great! Will fill in the gaps and merge this at some point today. Thanks :)
I had a go at rewriting the core concepts to get the data and accesssor function mentioned as early as possible. I used an injunctive voice and spoke to the reader as "you". That's a style I like but you might prefer something more formal?