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Peer Review #9

Open samuellyu-2021 opened 3 years ago

samuellyu-2021 commented 3 years ago

Hello Team Galla please find the peer feedback below.

Terrific use of visualisations and interactive figures in q1. The are both informative and visually engaging. One recommendation would be with Figure 3.2 that it could be improved slightly by acknowledging that it is a national overview in the figure or caption rather than just in the descriptions above. Terrific inclusion of the animation, it is once again both visually appealing and engaging however, it can be a little bit hard to decipher the data being presented.

The interactivity and color schemes throughout the report provide for a very engaging experience reading through this report. Strong analysis and explanation conducted at the bottom of question 2, the regression results are presented well and allow for a great understanding of the relationships between the different variables. Figure 3.12 could be improved with an adjustment to the “out.height” as the figures come through far too small to interpret, as presented below:

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Overall fantastic and engaging work, the report is succinct and to the point, well done!