The report is well written. The objective (primary and secondary questions) of the report was clearly specified in the introduction and discussion showed how each question were associated with one another. Figures were all given a caption and reference.
Some great findings were also made and external evidence were used to expand on the implications of figures.
For example:
"The time astronauts spent in space increased through the spaceflights histories... [exceeding] 480 hours ... [because of] the launch of the International Space Station (ISS) program in 1998 (NASA, 2013)."
Great use of git tools for collaboration:
Structured delivery of work
Commits and merges were done regularly
Small topic branches were utilised
Conflicts resolved effectively
Area of improvement
Tables may be added to further improve the analysis, for example, it can be used in conjunction with figures to articulate the results better
Document (comment) codes to improve code readability, can help to convey the purpose behind the use of some codes for the reader
Colour of figures can be more consistent
e.g. In figure 3.3, 'other countries' were denoted in green while 'U.S.S.R' were coloured 'purple'
In figure 3.4, 'other countries were 'red' while 'U.S.S.R was denoted in 'green'
Review
The report is well written. The objective (primary and secondary questions) of the report was clearly specified in the introduction and discussion showed how each question were associated with one another. Figures were all given a caption and reference.
Some great findings were also made and external evidence were used to expand on the implications of figures. For example:
Great use of git tools for collaboration:
Area of improvement