Closed paulbastian closed 2 years ago
[Same comment as #28 ]
Looks good. I see some language cleanup that could be applied, and it would be good to have a session where we go through the changes section-by-section, but I think that will mostly be polishing. I suggest we merge this, do a language/clarity clean up (one person) and then dig for comments about each section.
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