kakaomonk / discrimination_in_police_award_nominations_chicago

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Peer Review 2 #2

Open kaavyakalani26 opened 4 months ago

kaavyakalani26 commented 4 months ago

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Our study not only validates the original findings but also delves into the disparities in years of experience, and other potential variables —

  • This line seems incomplete, maybe you want to list what are the other variables.
  • The introduction is written nicely. Do not forget to update the "We use —- to find out —-. We observe a significant —- in our analysis, which reveals that —-." once your analysis is complete
  • The data section looks good.
  • Add a caption for Table 1 and use inline referencing to reference it when talking about it instead of just writing "Table 1"
  • Discussion about Figure 1 is pending
  • Model set up looks good but maybe you could explain what the model is in more detail so a wider audience can understand your paper better.
  • The results and discussion section is empty right now so I cannot provide feedback on that
  • Make sure to include your references. Do not forget to cite R especially!!
  • Consider adding a table of contents so that the reader knows whats to come and where to find what.
  • Overall your paper looks like it is headed in a strong direction. Do add visualisations and complete the results and discussions to finish the paper. Excited to see the complete paper.
Kjeongwoo99 commented 4 months ago

Thank you very much.

kakaomonk commented 4 months ago

Thank you for your feedback in a well-organized format. We will make some changes!