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Implement copy for < 13 review page #47

Closed threeqube closed 11 years ago

threeqube commented 11 years ago

Copy ticket here: https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/46

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Final copy:

Review [Earner Name]'s Badge Application

[Earner Name] would like you to review their materials in pursuit of the [Badge Name] Badge. Review the evidence they've uploaded and an optional reflection, then mark your decision below.

[Earner Name]'s Evidence

[Earner Name]'s Reflection

Check all criteria [Earner Name] has met for this badge The badge will only be awarded if you check all required criteria. [Criteria checkboxes]

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check all that apply. [Checkboxes for list below] You did a great job! You went above and beyond. Creative and thoughtful work. Nice reflection of your work. Good job. You met all the criteria needed to earn this badge. You still have a few criteria to meet to earn this badge. Make sure you take a look at all the criteria before reapplying. You didn't submit relevant evidence. Your evidence did not properly reflect the criteria.

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chloeatplay commented 11 years ago

Took a stab on the copy as suggested per @threeqube, added some kid-friendly options for the precaned msgs. Edit as you wish :)

[Checkboxes for list below]

Holy kittens! U haz impressive work. In the land of awesome, your work is king. That was badgilcious! Keep up the good work. You create AND you think too! Nice reflection of your work. 1,2,3! You met all the criteria needed to earn this badge. What are you waiting for, go get some moar! Almost there! You still have a few criteria to meet to earn this badge. TIP Alert: make sure you take a look at all the criteria before reapplying. Whoops! Looks like you didn't submit relevant work. Try again, you know you can do it! TIP Alert: make sure you take a look at all the criteria before reapplying.

threeqube commented 11 years ago

:+1:

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Discussed with @chloeatplay and think we've got a balance of mentor-understandable and kid-excitable options here:

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check all that apply. [Checkboxes for list below]

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Final final copy:

Review [Earner Name]'s Badge Application

[Earner Name] would like you to review their materials in pursuit of the [Badge Name] Badge. Review the evidence they've uploaded and an optional reflection, then mark your decision below.

[Earner Name]'s Evidence

[Earner Name]'s Reflection

Check all criteria [Earner Name] has met for this badge The badge will only be awarded if you check all required criteria. [Criteria checkboxes]

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check all that apply. [Checkboxes for list below]

cmcavoy commented 11 years ago

We can only choose one message, can't choose more than one.

On Wed, May 29, 2013 at 6:05 PM, Emily Goligoski notifications@github.comwrote:

Final final copy:

Review [Earner Name]'s Badge Application

[Earner Name] would like you to review their materials in pursuit of the [Badge Name] Badge. Review the evidence they've uploaded and an optional reflection, then mark your decision below.

[Earner Name]'s Evidence

[Earner Name]'s Reflection

Check all criteria [Earner Name] has met for this badge The badge will only be awarded if you check all required criteria. [Criteria checkboxes]

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check all that apply. [Checkboxes for list below]

  • You did a great job!
  • That was badgilcious! Keep up the fantastic work.
  • You went above and beyond.
  • You create AND you think! Nice reflection of your work.
  • Good job. Your work rocks.
  • You met all the criteria needed to earn this badge. Nice.
  • Almost there! You still have a few criteria to meet to earn this badge. Tip alert: make sure you take a look at all the criteria before reapplying.
  • Shoot. You didn't submit relevant evidence. But you can try again!
  • Your evidence did not properly reflect the badge criteria. But we know you can do it (and be sure to check out the requirements when you reapply).

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threeqube commented 11 years ago

@cmcavoy they need to be able to choose more than one. Well that was as designed by @iamjessklein

If this a big issue, then we can relent but is it going to be a significantly bigger workload to enable choosing multiple?

cmcavoy commented 11 years ago

we have 2 days.

threeqube commented 11 years ago

Ok fine. :koala:

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Any chance we can include the option to select more than one in the future? (I know that question brings delight.)

In the meantime, I'd suggest limiting to these:

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check the box that applies.

threeqube commented 11 years ago

:+1:

toolness commented 11 years ago

@cmcavoy they need to be able to choose more than one. Well that was as designed by @iamjessklein

Um, no it wasn't... the mockup for canned responses in #46 has a single-select dropdown field, not a list of checkboxes. There is a list of checkboxes, but it's for the rubric, not the response.

Anyways, we can't do this in 2 days given all the other things we need to do for launch. :(

threeqube commented 11 years ago

As per @iamjessklein on this ticket we discussed this matter https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/18#issuecomment-17684493

and she said we can allow multiple responses. That's what we shared during the training session as well.

Totally understand that for now, they'll just have to select one answer.

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Final copy, moving to implementation:

Review [Earner Name]'s Badge Application

[Earner Name] would like you to review their materials in pursuit of the [Badge Name] Badge. Review the evidence they've uploaded and an optional reflection, then mark your decision below. Thank you!

[Earner Name]'s Evidence

[Earner Name]'s Reflection

Check all criteria [Earner Name] has met for this badge The badge will only be awarded if you check all required criteria. [Criteria checkboxes]

Add your feedback and suggestions Please check the box that applies.

threeqube commented 11 years ago

:+1:

chloeatplay commented 11 years ago

I m not sure we need multiple responses, even though it would allow more variety it really doesn't add much to the feedback since the options cover the main cases.

On Thursday, 30 May 2013 at 08:31, threeqube wrote:

As per @iamjessklein (https://github.com/iamjessklein) on this ticket we discussed this #18 (https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/18#issuecomment-17684493) and she said we can allow multiple responses. That's what we shared during the training session as well.
Totally understand that for now, they'll just have to select one answer.

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threeqube commented 11 years ago

Sounds good. Thanks @chloeatplay

threeqube commented 11 years ago

@cmcavoy this issue is assigned to @curlee and has been closed...

Final copy is here https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/47#issuecomment-18681144

iamjessklein commented 11 years ago

Agreed with actions taken, but for the record - the reason we had several options was to support different kinds of user interactions. For example, a learner needed to work harder, there would be language around that.

emgollie commented 11 years ago

Thanks @iamjessklein. Do these stripped down options still meet those needs?

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chloeatplay commented 11 years ago

@iamjessklein agreed- and @emgollie had plenty covered in her previous iteration. Personally I prefer the past solution with more options than the srtipped down version over here, especially since the chosen ones sound a bit wooden as have mentioned previously. IMHO including more options that have more variety is best both for the age of the target audience and in the case of providing the same student with the same line for a series of badges.

threeqube commented 11 years ago

@cmcavoy can we add in choose more than one feedback as per thoughts here? If not, we'll go with what @emgollie has here https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/47#issuecomment-18865672 but if we can leverage our devs to enable ability to pick more than more option, than we'll go with the previous longer list of pre-canned feedback messages here https://github.com/mozilla/aestimia/issues/47#issuecomment-18651999

cmcavoy commented 11 years ago

I'd rather stick with a single message so we can hopefully get more done with favorites.

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@cmcavoy https://github.com/cmcavoy can we add in choose more than one feedback as per thoughts here? If not, we'll go with what @emgolliehttps://github.com/emgolliehas here but if we can leverage our devs to enable pick more than more option, than we'll go with the previous longer list of pre-canned feedback messages.

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threeqube commented 11 years ago

Works for me. EVERYONE, for now, we're gonna do select one pre-canned message.