Closed robertoostenveld closed 2 years ago
The ORCID of Daniel is https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1593-2559
line 46, resting state, passive movements, and go
.
I suggest to call it the "go task" for consistency and to make the order consistent. Now in the subsequent section the go task comes before the passive movements.
The NatMEG-PD dataset includes 66 PD patients ...
The NatMEG-PD dataset includes data from 66 PD patients ...
line 117, please capitalize "Go task"
line 144, what is "LT"? Is that a left foot injury?
line 114, 116 and 120: since a but further down you use ####
, I suggest you use that here as well, instead of making these subheadings bold
line 146 see "-events.tsv" files for more info
that should be _events.tsv
with an underscore
line 131, please insert an empty line after the Clinical data and metadata
heading.
This also applies to the headings on line 162 and 170
line 163 due to privacy concerns regarding the research participants
, I suggest to avoid the word "concerns" (as you don't have concerns any more) but instead write to protect the privacy of the research participants
line 163, the period is missing at the end of the sentence
It points to the same license twice (the 1st and 3rd)