natmegsweden / NatMEG-PD_data

Scripts for preperation of data for sharing
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issues with the BIDS_data/README #9

Closed robertoostenveld closed 2 years ago

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

The NatMEG-PD dataset is available through EBRAINS (www.ebrains.eu) under the terms of EBRAINS Data Usage Agreement for human data (https://strapi-prod.sos-ch-dk-2.exo.io/EBRAINS_Data_Use_Agreement_90858e7836_ef3ee29d50.pdf) and EBRAINS General terms of use (https://strapi-prod.sos-ch-dk-2.exo.io/EBRAINS_General_Terms_of_use_e457353c1a_d2122f84c2.pdf) and Data Use Agreement (https://strapi-prod.sos-ch-dk-2.exo.io/EBRAINS_Data_Use_Agreement_90858e7836_ef3ee29d50.pdf).

It points to the same license twice (the 1st and 3rd)

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

The ORCID of Daniel is https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1593-2559

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 46, resting state, passive movements, and go.

I suggest to call it the "go task" for consistency and to make the order consistent. Now in the subsequent section the go task comes before the passive movements.

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

The NatMEG-PD dataset includes 66 PD patients ...

The NatMEG-PD dataset includes data from 66 PD patients ...

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 117, please capitalize "Go task"

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 144, what is "LT"? Is that a left foot injury?

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 114, 116 and 120: since a but further down you use ####, I suggest you use that here as well, instead of making these subheadings bold

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 146 see "-events.tsv" files for more info that should be _events.tsv with an underscore

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 131, please insert an empty line after the Clinical data and metadata heading.

This also applies to the headings on line 162 and 170

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 163 due to privacy concerns regarding the research participants, I suggest to avoid the word "concerns" (as you don't have concerns any more) but instead write to protect the privacy of the research participants

robertoostenveld commented 2 years ago

line 163, the period is missing at the end of the sentence

mcvinding commented 2 years ago