Week 8 Review Ticket

[rebecca-123]

Total Score for Everyone: 7.5/8

TPT for Everyone: 3/3

Comment count: 26 (not including Mr. M's)

New Issues: Issue Comment

Issue Comment

[jm1021]

Review ticket in zoom

• [x] Time Box of Design/Issues/Features accomplishment in README.

1 minute of Project

• [x] Presenting project/ideas
• [ ] Technical highlights
• [ ] Key features planned for N@tM project

2 minute runtime

• [x] Show running project
• [ ] Mention anything that shows incorporation of mini lab technicals in project .25 extra
• [x] Runtime Feature 1
• [x] Runtime Feature 2
• [x] Runtime Feature 3

Technical overview

• [x] Technical Feature 1

• [ ] Technical Feature 2

• [ ] Be passionate about the technical, WOW factor.

Visuals and backgrounds and image map are very nice on main theme. Nice to see all the materials linked into your site.

Better coordination between runtime and technical, you could do things together. I did not understand Mantra.

[allisonthuang]

Woah... the navigation arrows are so cool. This is a lot I haven't seen before. I learned a lot about planets which I think is really awesome - everything was very interesting and was very charming in it's unconventionality. The website may be a little bit confusing to navigate if you're a user though. Maybe you can add an instructions page? I also really like the mantras page - it was a cool way of bringing in APIs with positive affirmations

[Danny4w]

positives- I liked the planet page idea improvements- user-friendly implementations; bigger text when you hoover over the different planets that displays the information; also the website could have better colors that pop out

[KylieScharf]

I like your descriptive read me with the informative time boxes that have the evidence of code within tables. I also liked the home page of your website that has interactive images that are not just static images. I also like the idea of having an informative website with information about commits and the solar system. I also like your color-coded brain writes and wireframes. One thing you could improve on is getting your about pages to work in the future.

[gigiguan]

I really like your idea about a digital gallery walk of the galaxy. I also like how organized your brain write was. Something I would improve on is removing the fade-in effect when you toggle back and forth between the planet pictures so the user doesn't have to wait to see the picture.

[TristanCopley]

Positives:

• Very cool !
• Theme was very cool
• You have so much done its impressive
• So much stuff going on its fantastic

Improvements:

• You guys are so good at designing however it seems like you spent more time on some pages than others. A few pages look cobbled together and really that is the only thing wrong with your project.

[JakubPonulak]

Positives:

• Very good looking theme, visually appealing, but doesn't take attention away from work/info, so reader can focus
• README looks organized; easy to understand, see what each person worked on
• Originality in Logic Gates lab: allowing user to choose which light bulb they want to yse Negatives:
• Some pages looked lackluster compared to the rest, maybe include a general theme that can be applied to every page

[DistilledVinegar]

The images fading in and out are a cool concept, but could maybe work better if the image were transparent. The individual pages about the comets were designed very well with tons of thorough information. The arrangement of the rest of the website was clear to follow along with, nice job.

[SlimeyTurtles]

Positives

1. I think the animations are cool and helps with the formatting
2. The clicking on the planets to gain more information is a good point to have in your pbl
3. Your groups is very expressive when you present, and I find it very entertaining Improvements
   • I think the website could be formatted a little neater

[yolandayangg]

Positives- I like the animation that fades in and out, it really brings action to the page. Homescreen is also very interactive. The planets are also interesting, I really liked how they were scaled to an accurate size.

Improvement- an instructions page or home button can be useful to navigate the website, since it's so complex.

[anika1sharma1]

What we liked:

• Very organized READme, website
• Super cool topic, implementations of classwork is relavent
• You've gone farther than the core lesson for all the miniLabs, great job

What you can improve on:

• colors/backgrounds are a little boring, you should change the fonts and colors

[Gaurish-Gaur]

Great job, the website looks amazing! I love the transitions throughout the rotated image gallery. One thing I think would be cool of you added there would be a greyscale since that would also combine that with some parts of our minilab and make it really unique.

[SreejaVad]

I really liked how organized everything was as well as how interesting your topic was! One improvement you could possibly implement is a more constant theme.

[AkhilNandhakumar]

I think the idea of the website is informational and useful for students. The wireframes looked really neat and organized, and fit with the entire theme of the website. The css that fades in and out was also really neat.

Try to fix the background on the about me pages, and some other pages looked a bit bland without much css.

[ValenReynolds]

The website is very intriguing with all the bright space colors. Very user interactive. It's very complex but it works. The "celestial objects" is complicated I would add some type of description/help for it.

[Stanleyy03840]

positive: cool interactive homescreen. very organize dropdown menus with interactive buttons for the user. very organized and neat, and I like improvements: i would add background for some pages with personalization

[shrutiapcsp]

Very interesting images and background of home page. Liked the thorough brainwrite and journals.

Suggestions; incorporate some of the technicals from the minilab into the project design

[kkwan0]

I felt that the fade in is a good idea, but sometimes it does look clunky and unpractical to use. The labs also do not fit the theme. Theme is not universal.

[KhushiB24]

Positives: I like how there is an animation that faded in and out. and there are many images for the information is being described to help the users better understand what the image is about. Another thing I like is there is an easy navigation to the comments made for the information page, such as the comets and planets. I like how there are pictures for the users to choose the image they would like, since there are many variations as to how the bulbs turn on and turn off.

Suggestion: A nav bar include going back to the home page, so the users can reference the main page of the website.

[B-G101]

The visuals on your website were super cool and I like how the images were fading in and out. The information was also super interesting and the designs we pretty cool. I would work on the organization and making it more user friendly.

[KoolKidKai]

+Well organized scrum board/readMe +nice theme and style +I like the idea, interesting -slide show seems very slow, could make them appear a little faster

[TheRadRabbidRabbit]

• Very neat UI
• Images are on point
• Most pages are visually appealing
• Some pages are less detailed or colorful than others

[Athena9355]

Positives:

1. I like how you made little changes to the color code page. Changing the button and results to 1 and 0s rather than the lightbulbs.
2. I like the background as it is clean and the website has the same theme through out.
3. I like the idea of your planet page! That is very creative. Suggestions:
4. add other navigation methods for the users to move back to the home page.

[AadyaDaita]

Positives: The theme was very nice and aesthetic. It was very organized and user-friendly. The idea was unique and practical.

Suggestions: I wish you can included more concepts you learned from the mini-labs, and also made sure the background was working on one of the pages.

[Kevinc023032]

The overall design and theme of the website was visually appealing, the buttons on the website worked perfectly. The website was very organized and easy to navigate through. The images fading in and out on the website was cool to see.

[nehapavani]

I really liked the galaxy theme that followed the topic of the website. Pages are visually appealing

Could be easier to navigate.

[NathanShih04]

+Galaxy theme was really nice +The planet page was pretty cool +Organized ReadMe -Make sure all pages are equally colorful