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Peer review by Yang Cheng #3

Open E1cheng opened 5 months ago

rex009x commented 5 months ago

Hi Yang Cheng, while I appreciate you for spending the time to consider writing a peer review, I noticed that you have provided no feedback.

E1cheng commented 5 months ago

Paper

R, github link and SSRP is appropriately cited. Title, Author, date, and abstract all good. The paper successfully integrates summary statistics and visual aids to illustrate its findings, ensuring that readers can easily grasp the trends and factors associated with declining birth rates in the US.

a. introduction Good introduction in broader context to motivat. But I think you should add more explicitly stating the main findings in the introduction for readers who may only read this section, thus fully adhering to the guideline that a reader should know what was done, why, and what was found.

b. result The paper includes detailed data visualizations, such as graphs showing trends in US birth rates from 1980-2020, birth rates by age group, education level, and parity. These visual representations are accompanied by descriptive text explaining the trends observed, effectively showing and talking about the results. The results part focuses on delivering findings without delving into interpretations or implications, adhering to the guideline that this section should strictly relay results.

c. discussion no discussion part

d. conclusion no any conclusion

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Sketch

Sketches are clear.

Code

Good simulation and test. Code is appropriately styled.