The format of the table of contents is not correct. Require changes.
This data processing looks like it's missing content and needs to be filled in.
Suggestion
The paper should thoroughly explain the dataset, including the context, variables, and rationale for dataset selection, complemented by detailed graphs and summary statistics for a full understanding of the data used.
The results section must clearly present the findings through descriptive and inferential statistics, graphs, and tables, with a narrative that guides the reader through the data's story without presupposing outcomes.
Missing from the discussion section is the weakness of this paper, which requires you to elaborate on what steps are not rigorous and need to be improved. There is also a future study that needs to be added to the discussion, in order to revise what is not rigorous or what is wrong, and what study we need to do in the future.
Paper
The format of the table of contents is not correct. Require changes.
This data processing looks like it's missing content and needs to be filled in. Suggestion
The paper should thoroughly explain the dataset, including the context, variables, and rationale for dataset selection, complemented by detailed graphs and summary statistics for a full understanding of the data used.
The results section must clearly present the findings through descriptive and inferential statistics, graphs, and tables, with a narrative that guides the reader through the data's story without presupposing outcomes.
Missing from the discussion section is the weakness of this paper, which requires you to elaborate on what steps are not rigorous and need to be improved. There is also a future study that needs to be added to the discussion, in order to revise what is not rigorous or what is wrong, and what study we need to do in the future.