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Peer review by Jacob #6

Open JfpGilbert0 opened 7 months ago

JfpGilbert0 commented 7 months ago

Introduction

not your job to decide the trend is worrying
"Irreversable downward trend" why is it irreversable, this is a big statement to make and is not supported here
maybe move the table of contents to its own page
Results X2
Again adjectives like "most severe" are conclusions
EMpty section
the rest
Bad Y- axis
Figure labels could use more detail
Discussion section is fairly bare and missing some ruberic elements such as further research