The paper presents an analysis exploring the impact of air quality on mortality rates associated with diseases using data over a period of time and modeling. The paper has a strong data cleaning and preparation.
Recommendations
Figures seemed to be very unorganized
for example for the model on page 13, try to create seperate visuals so that the readers can see what the graphs represent
LLM usage is documented
Overview is unedited
Title is "Datasheet for 'A dataset'', needs change
Authors are "first author, another author', needs change
Abstract is missing
Link to github is missing
All the r codes are showing in the rendered pdf file.
The calls for figures are giving errors. Try to fix them: (?@fig-bills), (?@fig-planes), (?@fig-ppcheckandposteriorvsprior-1), (?@fig-ppcheckandposteriorvsprior-2), (?@fig-stanareyouokay-1), (?@fig-stanareyouokay-2).
Try to add conclusion section in the paper
Conclusion
This paper does its job to help readers understand the impact of air quality on mortality rates . With numerous visulization with colors, the paper will be strong with some edition and clarification. The paper shows sign that the authors have a clear understanding of the study. Thank you for your work and thank you for reading.
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Overview
The paper presents an analysis exploring the impact of air quality on mortality rates associated with diseases using data over a period of time and modeling. The paper has a strong data cleaning and preparation.
Recommendations
Conclusion
This paper does its job to help readers understand the impact of air quality on mortality rates . With numerous visulization with colors, the paper will be strong with some edition and clarification. The paper shows sign that the authors have a clear understanding of the study. Thank you for your work and thank you for reading.