Peer review

[geunchulshin]

BASICS

• R is properly cited
• sketches are well drawn
• Scripts are well written

Overview

The paper presents an analysis exploring the impact of air quality on mortality rates associated with diseases using data over a period of time and modeling. The paper has a strong data cleaning and preparation.

Recommendations

• Figures seemed to be very unorganized
  • for example for the model on page 13, try to create seperate visuals so that the readers can see what the graphs represent
• LLM usage is documented
• Overview is unedited
• Title is "Datasheet for 'A dataset'', needs change
• Authors are "first author, another author', needs change
• Abstract is missing
• Link to github is missing
• All the r codes are showing in the rendered pdf file.

  try using

  #| echo: false
  #| warning: false
  #| message: false

• The calls for figures are giving errors. Try to fix them: (?@fig-bills), (?@fig-planes), (?@fig-ppcheckandposteriorvsprior-1), (?@fig-ppcheckandposteriorvsprior-2), (?@fig-stanareyouokay-1), (?@fig-stanareyouokay-2).
• Try to add conclusion section in the paper

Conclusion

This paper does its job to help readers understand the impact of air quality on mortality rates . With numerous visulization with colors, the paper will be strong with some edition and clarification. The paper shows sign that the authors have a clear understanding of the study. Thank you for your work and thank you for reading.

[shivankgoel003]

Your suggestions and feedback was really helpful. We tried our best to keep in mind the suggestions you pointed.

Thanks