Reference (Include section and paragraph number): Sections 'Abstract', 'Keywords', and 'Executive Summary'
Comment (Include rationale for comment): There are repeated incorrect definitions of 'UML' as 'Unified Markup Language'; UML is correctly defined elsewhere in the same document, and in the document listed as reference 1 in Appendix C.
Suggested Change: Anywhere in the document where UML is defined, refer to it as the Unified Modeling Language. In addition, the inconsistent capitalization could also be addressed.
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Organization Type: 4
Document (e.g., VoterRecordsInterchange): NIST.SP.1500-103-rev
Reference (Include section and paragraph number): Sections 'Abstract', 'Keywords', and 'Executive Summary'
Comment (Include rationale for comment): There are repeated incorrect definitions of 'UML' as 'Unified Markup Language'; UML is correctly defined elsewhere in the same document, and in the document listed as reference 1 in Appendix C.
Suggested Change: Anywhere in the document where UML is defined, refer to it as the Unified Modeling Language. In addition, the inconsistent capitalization could also be addressed.
Organization Type: 1 = Federal, 2 = Industry, 3 = Academia, 4 = Self, 5 = Other